Hellooo everyone! Just to give you a heads up, we're at about 3,300 words on the essay/almost eleven pages without Carson's part of the essay and my part of the essay! I will need a little help as far as citing works (just to make sure we have enough) and also for the formatting APA style (never done that before). I'll send you an updated copy sometime later today. Please please pleaseeeeeeeee read through it really carefully. I made a few changes in some of your essays and for other essays I changed a lot because a few of you said some of the same things and I tried to make it flow a little better. Let me know if you don't agree with how I phrased something and I'll change it. Seriously, at least make one or two comments as far as how to change it- because I'll automatically assume that you didn't read it if you just say something like "looks great!"

- rachel :)